It's a really good song, just miss something
Nice melodies, but I miss something different. I don't know what it is, I just feel like I've heard something exactly like this before. I don't know, but it's a good song, just try being more original and making something more different. Although I know it's hard when you only have the FL studio 8 demo with limited presets.
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