I like your style! The cartoon itself was a little boring though. Like the guy below said, try more animation. I'd like to see more from you.
well im glad you do :)!!!
Nice animation! I really enjoyed it.
Seen worse, but...
The graphics were bad and looked like something that could have been made in MS Paint in five minutes. No advanced use of colors and shading. The entire animation didn't have too many frames either.
I personally dislike Microsoft Sam/Mike/Mary/etc. voices, and some real voice acting would have been much better.
Overall, a rather bad animation. Use some more time on your next one, if you plan to make some serious flash.
[Review Request Club]
Personally, I can't picture the Dot with a human voice. However you got me with a my own voice. That good enough for ya?
Impossible to Win
Bad graphics, but it had a point at least. too short, and the fact that it's impossible to win in any way irritates me. 3 points to you. Good luck next time, I like the concept.
The second round with old glory equipped, suddenly it was out of function. It didn't work to shoot at all. I lost.
Because of this bug, I will not give it 10. Great game though!
I liked it
I liked it! For a demo this is pretty good!
examples of what can be improved in the full version:
- More smooth lines and edges on the blocks you jump on
- More details when the character is in motion
- More actions the character can do (such as kicking, hitting, crouching etc.)
- Add more features in the main menu so people listen to larger parts of my song (muhaha)
I'm looking forward to the full version! PS: How do you make levels? Is it all code or a graphical program that makes it fast and easy? A level editor would always be awesome!
Glad you liked it , and of course i'm gonna improve the menu so people listen more of your song ;D
In my eyes, the melody generally wasn't that interesting and original, but it became better towards the end. Something I really liked about this song was the drums. The fast double bass drum was neat, and there was enough variation in the song. This song is surely meant to be epic, but perhaps it would have been even more epic if it was a little longer? Other than that, a good song.
I have said it before, and I'm saying it again, you should really consider buying the full version of FL (or download it >:D) or try another prorgram, as I can easily recognize most of the sounds from other songs you've made (which makes it hard to distinguish them from each other, as well as some of them doesn't sound that good).
hey, havent heard a review from you in a while.
i've been wanting to buy the full version for a while now, im just sure if im ready, finacialy yet, or even how to. i've been trying to make new sounds using the presets and all that whatnot, but thats doesnt seem to be cutting it. also i wanted to make it longer, but the way i had it set up, i couldnt think of how to build from the ending point. the ending itself isnt how i was hoping it'd be, but whatev. i may come back to this sometime in the future, when i have the full version... XD
anyways, thanks again for the review, 8, and your time in listening!! :)
This one's different
This one was funny! Sounds a bit oriental-inspired. I missed one or two memorable melodies, as that's more or less what I need to find in a song to really like it. But the song has, as you've written in the comments, lots of variation in instruments. Nice drums around 00:50, for instance!
hey, you again!! as strange as it was, this one just came to me, out of nowhere, all at once. never had so much ease (or fun) making a song b4. i had a couple of issues, but other than that, im really not sure how i pulled this one off. first time in a while i've finished one from start to finish like that
anyways, thanks again for the review, 8, and your time in listening
Some of the parts in this song just blew me away. I'm giving this piece a 10/10 simply because of the great part starting at around 02:00, although the rest of the song was pretty neat.
I really think you should get the full version of FL studio, or another program (mine for instance), because I think you've got a lot of good melodies and rhythms but they would sound much better with more properly chosen instruments and samples. Like, you can draw nicely - you just need a better pencil... (that was a metaphor)
nice metaphor. i totally understand what u mean. i've been meaning to give your program a try, but i forgot what it was called... LLMS i think it was?? might have been 2 M's. if i knew how to get the full version of FL i would totally do it
anyways, i actually had a lot of fun making this one, it could've been better, i kinda got a tad lazy towards the end. but i'm glad u enjoyed it
thanks again for the review, 10, and your time in listening!!
Nice cartoony character! Perhaps not that impressive as just an image, but if put in a flash movie or something, it could have been real great!
hey, i missed this review
i did it just for fun, but im glad you like it!!
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